Tuesday, 31 May 2011

Last Night


Last night
you whispered,
I want you.
Your eyes,
passionate,
consumed me.
Your moist lips,
denying me
reprieve,
burned me.
Your touch
teased sighs
from my
yielding body.
Last night
I dreamed
of you.
© Rose

8 comments:

  1. You make excellent use of the short line and avoid its drawbacks.

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  2. Thank you Dave:)
    Not sure about the punctuation though! To do or not to do now that's the question!

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  3. Thank you ever so much Rachel!

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  4. Definitely my kind of dream. So beautifully moving.

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  5. passionate and beautiful ... really enjoying coming to your blog after a long time.

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  6. Ah Celest, It is so nice to have you back again, I missed you dearly!

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