Friday, 17 February 2012

Dreams


dreams
shredded fragments
pale as the moon
flutter like
flimsy apparitions
to be snarled
and snared
in the shadows
of nightmares
futile fantasies
tangled in
complex
mind games
waning
wilting
withering
beneath
the veil
of delusion
© Rose

12 comments:

  1. Wonderful description of our sleep life. A most evocative poem here, Rose. Thanks.

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  2. What a dark, sad piece. I love 'snared in the shadows of nightmares'. Do you get any sleep at all?
    Bravo.

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  3. Elizabeth,
    Thank you! I wonder why we forget our dreams sometimes and at other times dreams are so vivid and easy to recall :D

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  4. Rachel,
    *chuckles* not as much as I would like:D Thank you dear lady!

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  5. I love this poem, and the photo goes so well with it.

    I guess the reason you can't find me on some of my blogs is because I have closed them. I have three open to the public. Following are their addresses.

    http://annsmoodyblues.blogspot.com I only post on it once a week, each Tuesday for the ABC Wednesday meme.

    http://annsreadingcorner.blogspot.com I post bookie memes etc. on this blog.

    http://gigianns.blogspot.com I post my book reviews and other bookie things on this blog.

    I'm sorry I confuse you all the time. But, I decided to cut back on my blogging, so closed all my other blogs.

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  6. Wow!
    That is by far the best definition of dreams I have ever read.
    Dreamlike itself, this poem speaks volumes to the psyche.
    I really love it :)

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  7. Ann,
    Thank you. What a pity. thank you for your other links will pop in again soon :D

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  8. Ygraine,
    Thank you appreciate it greatly :D

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  9. i think this one is the best! hugs ...

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  10. hugs Moon! Thank you for reading all my writes :D

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