Saturday, 4 December 2010

You Said...

the sun was shining in our eyes
you said 'everything will be alright you'll see'
we built castles in the sand until the tide came
and took them away
you said 'everything will  be ok'
we built castles in the sky until the sun set
at the end of the day
you said 'everything is gonna be alright'
we lay and watched the stars until the clouds came
and danced in the rain
you said 'everything will be alright'
Yet we knew nothing would be the same
© Rose


  1. Beautiful poem. Ah! I miss the sea so much!

  2. Thank you kindly. So do I Rachel, so do I, I am here sat in the cold dreaming of the sunshine and the sea - WELL - even the sea without the sunshine will do actually!!

  3. Touching and romantic words. I can just sit by the beach and stare into the horizon and day dream the whole day.

  4. Thank you Autumn Belle I am also drawn to the sea and am intrigued by the changing tides.

  5. Lovely poem, Rosie!
    He will take you to a restaurant one day, he will! :)

  6. Thanks Natty, still waiting but I sure won't hold my breath :)


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