Monday, 27 April 2015

Your Kiss

Sweet poison -
My protests die
upon my lips

A million
butterflies born
to die

flutter,
restless
from your kiss
©Rose

22 comments:

  1. Oh my, oh my I can savour your lipstick :)

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    1. Ah, now was it strawberry or hot cherry? :))

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    2. :D delightfully naughty :D

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  2. All I can say is WOW!
    Love it, Rose ...

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  3. How sweet? But how short too. "A million butterflies born to die", I liked it.

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    1. Thank you Dumcho, perhaps next time something longer :)

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  4. Such depth...in so few words...oh Rose, you never disappoint!
    This is truly amazing...so sensual, so deep...oh WOW!!!

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    1. Thank you Ygraine for your enthusiasm :)

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  5. Precious short poem, dear Rose.
    In Spain we say that "the best perfume is kept in little bottles". :)
    I think yours is the most beautiful poem I have ever read about a love kiss, that sweet sensation: yes, you feel a million butterflies dying on your lips and... you want a million more born to die again and again.
    A hug.

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    1. Thank you Dulcina you have indeed captured the essence of my poem :)

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  6. A million butterflies born to FLY.

    As Vandana said, this is a sensuous piece; and I'll add, the type you're so good at.

    The butterflies brought to mind a song I sang to my daughter, who now has a daughter of her own, "Butterfly Kisses" by Bob Carlisle https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2FyjKQvWKw8

    Thank you Rose.

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    1. Thank you Gnome. You are the sharpest little tool in the shed aint you ;) :))
      What a lovely song and what a lucky little girl to have you as her daddy :)

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    2. A butterfly kiss to you Rose. Thank you so much for all your readings and comments. Kisses.

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    3. Thank you Gnome, caught and accepted gracefully :) kisses

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  7. beautiful and smooth flowing... so Rose like .... I miss you dear friend .... a wonderful and promising 2016 for you. Take my love.

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    1. I miss you to dear lady, thank you and an awesome 2016 for you. I will grab a slice of that :) hugs and kisses

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