Saturday, 13 February 2016

You Make Me Feel

You are trapped in my mind
in the maze of my dreams
haunting me

Your whispers brush my cheek
get tangled in my hair
tormenting me

Your touch  melts my heart
scorches my soul
torturing me

Your kiss leaves me breathless
words die on my lips
confusing me

Your eyes leave me vulnerable
naked before you
shaming me
Your gaze grazes my skin
I embrace the pain
you make me feel
©Rose

13 comments:

  1. O Rose that is so very beautiful - thank you for letting us into your heart :)

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    1. Thank you - it is love's emotions :)

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    1. Thank you Vandana for your kind comment :)

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  3. Oh Rose...you have brought tears to my eyes yet again!
    This is truly mesmerizing...both the image and your beautiful words...oh gosh...really captured my heart.:))

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  4. Oh Rose...you have brought tears to my eyes yet again!
    This is truly mesmerizing...both the image and your beautiful words...oh gosh...really captured my heart.:))

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    1. Oh Ygraine I am sorry. Thank you.

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  5. A sweet mixture of romanticism and sensuality, expressed with mastered delicacy.
    If I had to choose two images from your poem, these would be the winners:
    -Your whispers brush my cheek, so lovely! :)
    - Your gaze grazes my skin, yeah! what a feeling! :)
    And the end... what an end!
    I embrace the pain
    you make me feel
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    (You think men can understand this feeling...?)
    A hug, dear Rose.
    :)

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    1. Thank you Dulcina for your lovely comment.
      I don't believe men can no you are right :)
      Hugs dear lady xx

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  6. Ha! ;P so... you don't agree then? :D

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