Monday, 17 September 2012

The Temptation of Dreams

I saw in your eyes
a blinding vision
a passion, a fire
a spark of desire
But nothing is
what it seems

The temptation
 of dreams
The final illusion

Trapped inside
a memory
I wish I could
make you see
make you feel
make it real

Darken my eyes
Set me free


  1. Much passion here, a wanting more than a memory, a wishing to be seen and set. A very yummy yearning! :)

  2. Aah! Such longing to transform mere memory into flesh...makes me come out in goosebumps!
    Evocative and incredibly beautiful, I will never forget this one, Rose :)

  3. Gnome,
    Such vivid dreams woven in vain, Sigh!

  4. Ygraine,
    Thank you dear friend. But dreams are mere burrs that stick and cling to the subconscious like a seed on barren ground
    and no amount of sun or water will make them grow:)

  5. Wow, terrific one, Rose: the image, the gothic letter fountain and your words match perfectly.
    Dreams... humans need dreaming to survive reality and when dreams come true, new dreams are to come and go.
    A hug, dear Rose.

  6. Thank you Dulcina yes we do need dreams:)


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