Friday, 28 September 2012

You Fill My Senses

you are
the gentle caress
of wind 
on my lips
the tender kiss
of dew
on dawn's bareness
the warm sunrise
on my sleepy 
eyes
the summer 
rain upon
my nakedness
an oasis
in the desert
of passion
you fill my senses
with sweet
temptation
Rose

10 comments:

  1. super!
    I love 'summer rain upon my nakedness' -- such a provocative image!

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  2. oouuu la la! uumm uumm uumm! sweet temptation indeed. so so good.

    I agree with Rachel. "the summer rain upon my nakedness" hit me immediately.

    sigh....

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  3. So warm...inviting...full of passion.
    I FEEL this deeply, Rose,
    so so deeply...:)

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  4. John Denver's "Annie's song" came to my mind as soon as I read your title. It's one of our favourite songs.
    Your lyrics are very romantic too, but more passionate than Denver's though.
    A hug, Rose.
    :)

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  5. Gnome,
    *chuckles* thank you for your enthusiastic comment ;)

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  6. Ygraine,
    Thank you I am touched by our comment:)

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  7. Dulcina,
    Thank you, you are so kind. Hugs :)

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  8. Beautiful image and words - thank you Rose!

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  9. Thank you Liz, you are so kind :)

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