Saturday, 9 March 2013

Take my Heart

take my beating heart
i don't need it anymore
if we should ever part
i'll have nothing to live for
i could die with you
even die for you
but one thing is true
i cannot live without you
so take them all,
my foolish pleas, my words 
 that fall
like crumbs at your feet,
and throw them to the birds
that flock in the street
their wings will whisper
the sweetest love song
from a girl to her lover
after love has long gone 


  1. The muse returns with a plea, strong but sad but sweet. Says well what the ripping out of one's heart feels like when love leaves. No foolish words here.

  2. Beautiful and sad. I can see the despair.

  3. Gnome, Thank you, but sadly the muse remains mute and elusive, this is a poem to my muse actually :D

  4. Rachel,
    Thank you dear lady :)

  5. Oh Rose...this is so tragic and haunting.
    I can FEEL the deep despair in your words.
    How I long to offer a sisterly hug to this poor suffering heroine...:(

  6. Gnome, Alas! A Muse is like a cat, you don't own them, they own you :D

  7. Ygraine, Thank you I need a hug right now, but I fall far short of being a heroine! More of a wimp actually :D

  8. I ditto TUG - sad sweet and strong ... you write so beautifully Rose ... love you for that. :)

  9. Moon, Thank you dear lady:)

  10. Unconditional love that just knows how to give love without expecting anything. Loved this one:)

  11. Thank you Vandana Sharma :)


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